Wednesday, 3 March 2010

The Clockwork Valkyrie, Chapter Eight

Howdy!

Y'all know the drill. Chapter Eight of "The Clockwork Valkyrie", right here. Big fight scene (well two really) and an explosion of Arcane usage. I think this chapter fulfils the 'action' aspect of 'action-adventure' . Read and have fun.

http://original.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600101362&chapter=8

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

A most exciting chapter. I'm wondering if Milva gets to keep Ygg's Rood along with it's knowledge and power?

berndi said...

Nice. I just read all three or so of the latest chapters in a block, and they really took a turn. The Onion People are awesome, I felt so sorry for Hilde, and Milva's so badass it's crazy. Though, inevitably, she'll hide the Rood from all those who wish to harness its power for evil, and forever keep its location a secret!

That was just me being dramatic, but I'm guessing that something vaguely along those lines will happen. Milva's too nice. (Oh, and Flannery was so cute, acting all concerned like that. Nicely done)

Anonymous said...

Keep up the great work. This was by far the most exciting chapter I've read. It was also really cool how the mirror witch was killed. When Milva took the Ygg's rood from her and she lost all of the youth she stole, it was purely genius!