Thursday, 14 January 2010

The Clockwork Valkyrie, Chapter Two

What's good, peoples? I have the second chapter of "Clockwork Valkyrie" right here, ready to read (I believe). This is probably my least favourite chapter of the story because it's exposition heavy (much like the first) and makes the story seem slow, but as long as you keep reading the story's pace will progressively become quicker. Read, enjoy, but after you do, spare a thought for the folks down in Haiti. There's nothing more sobering than a natural disaster.

http://original.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600101362&chapter=2

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

i was wondering if you plan on updating "My Ice Creamy Kiss"

Anonymous said...

I love this newest story. While Milva's hatred for Agatha is completely understandable, I can't help but feel some affection for Agatha. She had real affection and care for Milva, and her possessiveness isn't just simple domination. I'm hoping for more, and soon.

Anonymous said...

I wonder if Milva can ever have a real, healthy relationship with someone after being living under Agatha.

Especially with a certain red-haired sky pirate.

Kaiser said...

Thanks for the comments, y'all. I'm surprised to see the Agatha symapthy though. I think that's probably because she's a slightly deeper character than Milva, but I didn't particularly hate writing her anyway. I love writing about complicated people.

Anonymous said...

Why not upload all the chapters if you have them done?

Kaiser said...

Well, I could put out all the chapters at once, and I've done that before (Grace and Fire, Legend of Allyn Arceneaux, etc) but I tend to get less feedback that way. I know it's a little selfish of me but I like to know what people think.

Anonymous said...

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