Hey there, everyone.
I have the last chapter of Piper + Meredith here for you. It's a bit longer than I intended (but not by much). As I said before, I'm gonna write an extended one-shot in follow up to it. If you have any requests or suggestions for it, feel free to let 'em rip (just remember that it will be told from Meredith's perspective only).
Thanks to everybody who gave my their support on this one, I had fun with it. So here it is, the last chapter. Hope you like it! ^_^
http://original.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600098655&chapter=11
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Ah, oh my God! I can't believe that's the end of it. It was amazing! I fell in love with this movie and, because of the last chapter, I was afraid you wouldn't let this story have a happy ending. There are just too many sad ending stories in real life, so I'm ecstatic that it wasn't the case here. I'm excited for Merry's version and for the other chapters in your story. Keep on writing :)
Wild Cat
Great ending :)
I read some of your other stuff on adultfanfiction, I've seen it elsewhere but didn't know it was you. Your writing is great, I'm an official fangirl ;)
A happy ending! I'm sad to see it end but so happy that Piper and Merry did end up together.
Although Piper's cameo in the last chapter of My Girl is My Poison sort of implied that things don't work out? I hope i'm wrong about that?
And when will we be getting the next chapter of MICK?
Keep up the excellent writing!
AH YESSSSS!!!!! You dit it! As Wild Cat ,i was afraid of a sad ending... Sometimes it s better but here the happy ending fit too well! Thanks a lot for all this strory and go on for a Meridith s sequel,i am whith you! Just an idea for your sequel: Piper find Meridith s diary... ? Thanks Kaiser,i go back to finish the shapphic jungle fever.. :-)
Ah, finally they talk! To each other! And listen! So good to finally see P&M be fully candid with each other, at the same time.
I did find it a bit odd that Piper's uncle (especially considering what his general worldview seemed to be) would allow her to move in without first determining what the root problem was between the McCullough women.
Powerful use of the wedding ring, with its significance illustrated in the first chapter, occasionally referenced in the intervening chapters, and used to powerful effect in the last, similar to your usage of the wine glass.
I am reminded (by contrast) of a counterexample from one of the longer (and more mediocre) books I've ever read, Battlefield Earth, which was also originally written in a serial format. In the later chapters, the main character recalled an event from much earlier in the story, which was never mentioned in the earlier chapters. It would have had more impact (and a more polished feel) had it been originally referenced in the earlier chapters, even if not developed in the intervening chapters. I appreciate the attention to detail that you (unlike L Ron Hubbard) have paid to those two elements.
I love that Piper was sneaking back for her mp3 player!
Thanks, everybody! I'm glad you all enjoyed it, I hope you like the epilogue I'm about to write and I'm especially grateful for all the support and feedback you've given me for Piper + Meredith. It helps me write more and faster.
In sum I think the story came out all right. Definite improvements can be made, but I'm kinda proud of it.
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