Third chapter of The Expatriates! is here everybody. This particular chapter introduces a new character for the group and has a focus on Justin. Read it and weep (well don't weep, it's not THAT bad, be joyful. Yeah, that's the word. Joyful ^_^).
http://original.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600099571&chapter=3
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Another great chapter as usual. I honestly haven't seen such a good superhero series in years.
Although i did spot a mistake in this chapter. When Justin, Maya and Dr Plame are on Google you said Terri was upstairs with "Molly", not Kimberlee.
Any plans for a Sapphic Spirit update in the coming weeks?
Gotta tell you Kaiser, I love the little touches you put into your stories. This latest chapter just proves it, with the reference to Amelia Earhart - I cracked up! Not just here, but also your 'Bonnie Situation' (namely Pulp Fiction) in Smells Like Sapphic Spirit. There are many others of course, but those one’s struck me in the immediate aftermath of reading this chapter. Most enjoyable. The historical and popular culture references just make you feel right at home. At least they do for me.
For a tale that's going to take you all year to post gradually, you seem to be offering up plenty of regular instalments. I can only marvel at your prodigious output and second Anonymous on their question about a Sapphic Spirit update. Cool to see another fan too. :)
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Thanks, you two. The Expatriates! is a story I work on a little harder than the others, especially when it comes to the personalities of each character, I hope that's landing.
As for the frequent updates on it, it's really only because I have the first four chapters pre-written. Number Four will be next, I'll have that up soon, but five and onwards are completely unwritten (planned out but not yet written). Chappie Five is the one that'll take a while.
And Smells Like Sapphic Spirit? I just put up chapter six, so read and be Merry, folks!
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